英语作文《做家务的好处》

I did a survey recently about doing housework among my friends to see people's attitude about it.The result is that most of them are tired of housework . I feel so amazing,because I think doing housework is very interesting,it makes youth more independent ,it means that we are not relay on our parents any more.And it also help us to get on well with our parents,we'll have more topics with them.Then we'll find communicate with our parents isn't hard.

I think it is important for Children to learn how to do housework . Doing chores helps to develop children's independence. Children these days depend on their parents too many.They should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy.The earlier kids learn to be independent,the better it is for their future.

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